Fujitsu ATLAS V14 User Manual page 257

Advanced Techniques
● Avoiding long modifiers
In Japanese, a modificand is placed after a modifier and long modifying expressions or
parallel modifiers make it difficult to identify the modificand. In English, on the other hand,
relative pronouns are used to indicate long modifying phrases. If original text is difficult to
interpret, however, its translation will also be difficult.
⇒ Avoiding consecutive modifiers
Action
⇒ Dividing a sentence to clarify modification
Ex. ×
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⇒ Changing an adnominal modifying form to an adverbial form
Action
Ex. ×
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■ Making clear original text
● Not omitting subject or object
In Japanese sentences, it may be possible to assume an omitted subject, object or
predicative from the context. A person other than its writer, however, may not be able to
comprehend such a sentence, which is therefore difficult to translate.
⇒ Adding a subject or object
Action
Ex. ×
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⇒ Adding a predicative
Action
×
Ex.
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誤用、 変更、 断線、 事故、 ある いは不適切なメ ン テ ナン スによ っ て起こ る 故障に
対する 修理およ び調整は保証でき ません。
Neither the repair nor the adjustment of the breakdown that happens because of a
misuse, a change, a disconnection, an accident or improper maintenance are
warrantable.
以下の事項によ っ て起こ る 故障に対する 修理およ び調整は保証でき ま せん。
誤用、 変更、 断線、 事故、 ある いは不適切なメ ン テ ナン ス。
Neither the repair nor the adjustment of the breakdown that happens because of
the following matters are warrantable.
Misuse, change, disconnection, accident or improper maintenance.
入出力障害が発生し た場合のオペレー タの最初の作業は、 障害媒体の復旧であ
る。
The first work of the operator when the I/O trouble occurs is restoration of the
trouble medium.
入出力障害が発生し た場合、 最初にオペレ ータ は障害媒体を 復旧する 。
When the I/O trouble occurs, the operator restores the trouble medium first.
順を 追っ て記述する 。
It sequentially describes it.
順を 追っ て機能を 記述する 。
The function is sequentially described.
会員は 3 万円、 非会員は 4 万円の参加費が必要。
The member is 30,000 yen, and the participation expense of 40,000 yen is
necessary for the nonmember.
会員は 3 万円が必要で、 非会員は 4 万円の参加費が必要。
30,000 yen is necessary for the member, and the participation expense of 40,000
yen is necessary for the nonmember.